The two-line problem
LinkedIn truncates the About section after roughly two lines on desktop, less on mobile. Everything after that is behind a click most visitors do not make.
So the opening cannot be a warm-up. "I am a passionate professional with a proven track record of delivering results" spends the entire visible space saying nothing, and the reader never sees the part where you say what you actually do.
Write the first two lines as if they are the whole thing. Often they are.
A structure that works
- Lines 1–2: what you do, who for, and the one thing that distinguishes it. Concrete.
- Middle: two or three paragraphs of evidence — what you have built, at what scale, with what result.
- Close: what you are looking for, and how to reach you.
That is it. Four hundred words is plenty; two thousand is a document nobody finishes.
Openings, compared
| Opening | Problem |
|---|---|
| "Passionate professional with a proven track record…" | True of anyone; says nothing |
| "Results-driven leader who thinks outside the box." | Adjectives with no evidence |
| "Welcome to my profile! A bit about me…" | Spends the visible space on preamble |
| "I build payment infrastructure for fintechs in India." | Works — clear and specific |
| "I help B2B SaaS teams take products from 0 to 1." | Works — states the niche |
| "Backend engineer. Ten years on systems that cannot go down." | Works — concrete and memorable |
First person, and why
Third person — "Priya is a senior engineer who…" — reads as a press release written about someone absent. It is standard in bios elsewhere and out of place here.
LinkedIn is a network where people expect to talk to you. First person is warmer, shorter, and matches the medium.
Specifics over adjectives
The single reliable upgrade to any About section: replace every adjective describing you with a fact demonstrating it.
- Not "experienced in large-scale systems" — instead the throughput, the user count, the uptime.
- Not "strong leader" — instead the team size and what it shipped.
- Not "skilled in modern frameworks" — instead the frameworks, by name.
Names and numbers also happen to be searchable, which adjectives are not.
Closing the section
End with direction. A reader who got this far is deciding whether to contact you, and this is where you make that easy.
- "Currently open to senior backend roles in Bengaluru or remote."
- "Happy to talk to founders building in fintech — reach me at name@example.com."
- "Not looking right now, but always up for a conversation about distributed systems."
If you are searching quietly, leave the availability line out and keep the contact route — the rest of the profile still works. How to stay discreet while searching is covered in removing the open to work badge.
Then go find the roles
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